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Original poetry with strong imagery; poems of cultural flux and interactions; personal translation of favorite works from the world's verse---these can be submitted at alyguy@hotmail.com.  As can commentary on poem eating.  So folks, send it on in.

VACANA POETRY     THREE ARAB POETS     ELISAVIETTA RITCHIE     RAY FREED     TIA BALLANTINE    

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Elisavietta Ritchie is a poet warm and prolific who lives currently in Maryland.  Through Tia Ballantine's listserv of daily poetry I became aquainted with her work.  Through a correspondence I got a whole bunch of stuff from her including a biblio/bio which I found factual but uninformative of Elisavietta the poet whose messages and poems I so enjoyed and resonated with.  So with some cajoling she's given us a small autobiographical introduction and you shall find it below along with her selection of poems for eating.  Enjoy the meal.

                                  Alan Young

 

 

 

Measuring Cups,

Measuring Spoons

1.

They gave her new sets

gleaming aluminum

inside plastic sarcophagi

too tough to cut by knife

Don’t they know

she scoops everything out

the hollow of the palm

is fine and at hand

hand where lines are etched

across the mounts

of passion travel war

imprint her shadow secrets

known only to dough

kneaded by hand

and nothing measured

or weighed

2.

Next a set of knives

six of tempered steel

Could they know she was known

at school for flipping blades

When she throws a party now

she can pass a knife to every guest

test who flips the best

who drips the most

3.

At last the perfect gift

a box of unbagged tea

They must have known

she likes it loose and hot

 

Elisavietta Ritchie


 

 

 

Measuring Cups
 

You gave me a set

A birthday gift

Gleaming aluminum

Don’t you recall

I never measure but

Scoop gollops in

The hollow of my palm

Suffices and is at hand

Fine lines etched

Across the mounts

Of passion life and war

Reveal my shadow secrets

New omens shared

Only with the bread

A perfect cake may lie

And so might I

 

Elisavietta Ritchie


 


 


 

HI Art readers,

A haiku from Issa, the early 19th century Japanese poet:                             

short summer night--
in the field turtles
cavort
-Issa, 1825

sent to Elisavietta Richie in Maryland some weeks ago resulted in a small correspondence

..."Dear Alan,
Glad you and Issa like turtles. Do you think Issa sat there watching them cavort. or is he just imagining? Maybe small sea turtles, as it is easier for them to cavort in the water.
I'll take the liberty of attaching a batch of my turtle poems."

She did so and, dear readers, enjoy them as much as I hope you did her previous poems in our e-zine.
Celebrate the return of warmer days and the long days of light, read and eat poetry.

               Aloha,

                     Alan Young

 

 

 

   

 

TURTLE WORK 

 

We would eat the sun,

feast on earthworms huge as Laocoon's snakes,

dream of turning into birds.

 

But we bear the world

on gleaming backs,

and at one threat of frost

 

we must claw deep in dirt

to keep the earth

alive, asleep.

 

A Sheath of Dreams And Other Games, Proteus Press, copyright 1976 Elisavietta Ritchie.


 

 


 

 

   
 

TURTLES

 

    Eternal

as turtles,

so we

are forced

   to court

slowly

  sharing

fallen persimmons

and swollen berries

with care

     to probe

     deep beneath shells

   where the skin

   above the heart

and other vital parts

is not

      so impregnable

and to bear

   our impenetrable

love

everywhere.
 

 

[Wetlands; Tightening The Circle Over Eel Country, Acropolis Books,

copyright 1974 Elisavietta Ritchie  (collection won the Great Lakes Colleges Association's "New Writer's Prize for Best First Book of Poetry 1975-76").]

 


 

 

   

 

DECEPTIONS
 

When my little turtle died he did not scream.

He stretched his arms upon a rock,

dropped his head beneath his sea

left his hindfeet dangling out.

 

He liked to lie in sunlight but

when I came near

he would retract within his simulated masks

of death—

 

When a decent interval had passed

and I was fooled,

he’d re-emerge to blink at me

and reassure, and eat my lettuce leaf.

 

Tonight I held a plum tomato by his mouth.

He ignored this bloodred moon,

ignored my probing fingertip.

 

From his double mask of life

limbs droop,

head’s flung out limp,

eyes hazed…

 

And I was sitting by his Lucite world all day

and did not know.

 

How can I add him to the orange rinds,

coffee grounds, the compost bin?

 

I seal him in a match box,

hope he quickly shrivels up                                                 

inside his ochre, gold and emerald plates.

 

I think he’d like the role

of amulet,

fool those who might not think

he’s real….

 

[Tightening The Circle Over Eel Country, Acropolis Books,

copyright 1974 Elisavietta Ritchie  (collection won the Great Lakes Colleges Association's "New Writer's Prize for Best First Book of Poetry 1975-76").]


 

 

 


 

 

   


SHELL GAME, or TURTLE-JACKING

Beyond the open-slatted pens
of peeling crabs
sit bins of terrapins

pointed snouts
headnecks speckled or veined
black on grey
pale chins
shells with ochre beige and black
stratigraphy
like undersea maps

Some hundred terrapins
feed on eels

Nets dry against the sky
to catch
the leftover moon

Crates wait
by rusty scales

On the other side of the wire
I pop the lock

lift out the terrapins
one by one
and three live eels

They slither and clunk
over the splintery planks
over the edge of the dock

drop into the port’s black brine
glistening rainbows of gas

Awakened gulls betray

I dive behind

 



We silently swim
toward channel lights
fixed green flashing white

Only our noses show

We plot our course
past pilings piers
barnacled rocks

We turtle-paddle
gathering speed
with the ebbing tide

over clay graves
of wrecked fleets
heap beneath the sea

over the shoals
out out into the bay
gulp the fresh salt waves

Beyond the farthest buoy
the regatta of turtles
stretching periscopes
toward the red sun

we cross the sea
to a marshy islet
not on any chart

here
herons, egrets, cranes
will keep watch

Even the eels
are singing
 


Elisavietta Ritchie

[Tightening The Circle Over Eel Country, Acropolis Books,
copyright 1974 Elisavietta Ritchie (collection won the Great Lakes Colleges Association's "New Writer's Prize for Best First Book of Poetry 1975-76").]


 

 


 

 

   


VISITATIONS, PROCREATIONS



A real big mother of a snapper
impervious to poison ivy, briars,
lumbers up the river bank.

Shell slate black, crenellated at the stern,
snake neck, scaly limbs, hook claws,
horny beak to sever fingers or a foot.

A dozen rabbits race about, skitter, bound,
zigzag, scatter among tiger lily clumps.
Still, I bet on her. She heads straight

across the yard, an armored carrier
programmed on a course set fifty years ago
when she was young, this lawn a forest.

She pauses on the grass. Confused?
Was there a house across her path before?
I offer her my pear core, sprint aside.

She studies me: with loathing, mere disdain,
slow-stirred memory of a duel beneath
primordial cycads, or am I the perfect meal?

She’s hellbent not on making war or lunch
but to unload her oblong leather eggs
in some cache underground. Now where…

I edge behind, lift her gingerly –
not only dangerous, she stinks --
carry her to an abandoned flower bed.

She takes off, a millstone on the march,
around the yard’s perimeter at such a pace,
distracted by the rabbits, I lose track.

She grunts through the herb bed,
crushes dill, churns the earth
between oregano and rosemary.
 



When I check again, she’s covered up
whatever spot she finally chose,
slid down the bank and disappeared.

How did that repellant hulk
entice a mate so tolerant
of her appearance, scent?

Was he drawn by long affection
or, with pure chelonian lust,
snatched the first female to swim past

for lengthy coupling or quick fix?
Love in the muck in the dark
or light of the moon on waves,

to prolong her dynasty engendered
before dinosaurs were born.
Like roaches, snappers may outlive us.

Unsure of their gestation span, I’ll watch
the spot, escort phalanxes of hatchlings
to the shore, ward off ospreys, foxes, gulls …

But this very night, raccoons search
among the herbs, leave shards
like broken ping-pong balls.


Elisavietta Ritchie

[published in Potomac Review 1999; reprinted in Fresh Water: Poems from Rivers, Lakes, and Streams, editor Jennifer Bosveld, Pudding House Press, 2002.]

 


 

 

   


MOON PURSUIT

3 October 1971

To get a jump on the moon
I swam out where it would rise
this night most close to Earth.

I treaded water on top of that place,
felt boiling beneath
my pale churning legs.

A turtle emerged, sifting foam.
I lunged, grabbed his shell--
He tried to bite—

I braided my hair, reined him in,
but he swam the horizon with me
weaving seines with the wake of his plunge.

“Please! Let’s return! The moon
will soon rise!” Out there, the sea swelled.
The moon crowned, huge, tearing waves.

We thrashed across crests. The apricot slid up the sky.
“Quick! It will turn into ice!”
He stretched his neck long, spread his beach—

He caught the moon right in his jaws,
chomped them shut, dripping blood.
We swam home in the dark.


[Tightening The Circle Over Eel Country, Acropolis Books,
copyright 1974 Elisavietta Ritchie (collection won the Great Lakes Colleges Association's "New Writer's Prize for Best First Book of Poetry 1975-76").]

 
 

 

 

           

Heidegger at the Breakfast Table


The way he goes at the bread!
A knife that might have slaughtered pigs
hacks slabs of pallid cheese.

A peasant’s shirt to show off his roots,
thick boots he should have left
on the stoop. Mud enough outside.

He insisted we visit his mountain
rather than himself descend
to our accessible plain.

Now he won’t let us eat in peace.
He demands we think about thinking
we think about breakfast.

He questions our human existence
as if we didn’t know we’re alive,
just out of breath being at his altitude.

We’re well aware of the limits to life
so why waste time on insoluble problems?
That’s what alienates us from dumb conundrums.

Better he lead us back through the woods,
point out a safe trail down that avalanched slope,
instruct how to circumvent wolves.

Yet…First, let’s pick just a few of those huge
         
          raspberries ripe on his briars…
  
                    Something is better than nothing at all.

         --
Elisavietta Ritchie
 


[published in Blue Unicorn, 2002; semi-finalist for Emily Dickinson Award Anthology Universities West Press, Glenn Reed, editor, 2002]
 

 

 

           

RECIPE: ONE ARTICHOKE


Hold me
tightly or
I'll roll free.

Slice through my spines.
Though I cry, show no mercy:
remember sea urchins.

Heat me an hour
among lemons, bayleaves,
peppercorns, salt.

Pry with care.
When at last
I spread a bit

peel me leaf by leaf,
bathe me
with hot butter,

scrape my softness off
with greedy teeth.
Discard thistles.

Beneath your knife
my heart waits. But
eat me slowly.

          --Elisavietta Ritchie

 
[first published in New York Quarterly; reprinted in Light; Raking The Snow, Washington Writers Publishing House, copyright 1982 Elisavietta Ritchie; and in Elegy For The Other Woman: selected and new terribly female poems, Signal Books, copyright 1996 Elisavietta Ritchie.]

 

 

             

ADVICE FOR A DAUGHTER

Do not gnaw chicken bones before
a lover, I tell her, as we crunch
the cartilage of a hapless hen.

Could put him off, give rise
to thoughts you might have
taste for more than skin.

My lover is so meticulous
he uses knife and fork,
misses deep pleasures.

I have to sneak to the kitchen,
chew both our drumsticks clean
before I scrape the plates.

The best is what some call
the parson's nose, others term
the pope's, the rabbi's.

My mother said: What scuttles
through the fence the last
is surely the most succulent.

So while our chicken stews apart
you and I retrieve the bubbling bones,
gnaw and, juices trickling down our chins,

weigh the risks of loss:
either a fastidious lover
or the choice parts of a bird.

          --Elisavietta Ritchie

 
  ["Advice For A Daughter": New York Quarterly, 1995; Hungry As We Are: XXth Anniversary Anthology, edited by Ann Darr, Washington Writers' Publishing House, 1995; and in Elegy For The Other Woman, Signal Books, copyright 1996 Elisavietta Ritchie]  

 

     

       

NUTMEG POEM

Ice sucks the sea
from the frosted beach.
We glean ten oysters,
shuck them although
our hands bleed.

As I grate nutmeg
over our oyster stew,
you mention that nutmeg
is hallucinogenic,
in rare cases even kills.

News to me, I shrug.
Nutmeg we need for the taste.
I scrape only the surface
of the big unresisting seed,
sprinkle the dangerous dust,

freckles over the creamy skin
of stew beginning to crinkle
and bubble and sigh inside,
undulating the frilled grey islands
afloat on a sherried tide.

By five stubby candles' light
we eat five oysters apiece.
You stop there. Are you scared?
I spoon the soup till it ebbs,
sop the last drops with hot bread.

All night outside, waves clink
emptied shells on the beach.
Bared branches grate the moon,
elliptic and pocked as a nutmeg,
while beyond, at the edge of the ice

geese the color of nutmeg
and swans the color of cream
whistle and honk in the cove
ready to soar
through the rind of the sky.

         
--
Elisavietta Ritchie

 

 
 

In Raking The Snow, Washington Writers Publishing House, copyright 1982 Elisavietta Ritchie; Also in an anthology since.

 

 

THREE ARAB POETS     ELISAVIETTA RITCHIE     RAY FREED     TIA BALLANTINE

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Ray Freed
February 1, 1939 - January 16, 2010

HI Art readers,
The following poems are from Ray's last publication SILVER FISH. Enjoy them. Remember his voice. To get a copy of SILVER FISH it's $12.00 shipping included from Street Press, P.O. Box 772, Sound Beach, NY 11789-0772.

 

Once on 66

Once on 66 hitching St. Louis to L.A.
I imagined trucks as bloodcells
of the Republic speeding
through arteries and veins.

Outside Gary a winter night
semis flew by so fast
thye didn't touch the asphalt
leaving a wash of wind
to tumble my duffle
off into the snow.

Thumbing one Spring up
Cumberland Gap a trucker stopped,
rode me 200 miles into the stockyards
where I walked stunned among
thousands of penned hogs,
each howling like a napalmed child
and I knew they smelled
their death in the mornig air.

I asked a watchman there about it.

Bitch in heat boy.
One sow in heat they all go crazy.

 
 

Hymn

The heart of my love rests
on the plains of cellophane
in the aisle of forgotten stuff.

She has prepared a meal for me,
with her two hands
placing the foil in the micro,

a simple act of love
and care as if she
tilled soil under hot sun,

nurtured each shoot
and in time harvested
this bounty for me alone.

My love's neck is like the swan's
her breast like fresh white snow
her breath clear and sweet as

the bank loan officer's or the clerk's
at the Nifty Quicky Superette.
After lunch we go to the Mall,

me and my love and the plastic,
me and my farmer girl, provider,
queen of high frequencies.

 


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Riches

Night nears, light recedes
from the black shore lava,
the sultry dancing bay waves.

I'm in the ocean of love again
under pressure and joyous blue.
You drop me because I have

no property, house or money.
Poets learn to expect this.

But when I ask as a farewell
that you recall a line, any line,
from one of my poems
and you cannot,
good riddance.

 

Mariner

Bloated
cold and blue
the body you sailed
for fifty two years
lays beached on the carpet.

Two med techs
strip your swim trunks
and without ceremony
lift you onto a gurney
roll you out the door
and down the steps
to their waiting van,
Charon's skiff.

A firm breeze,
a good day to
put out
to sea.
 



 

 

Hualalai

Fading sun slants a line
across verdant Hualalai,
greens made brighter
by that last gasp of light,
and the lava land Keahole
slips away like a dark sea wave.

Who knows what trickery startled
the owl Pueo off the road
to perch on the street lamp
as we drove down the darkened drive

or what trickeries coax the gecko to cling
to the ceiling above us now,
mouthing a song like far-off laughter.
He makes it out of air.
       
          --Ray Freed

 

 

In The Morning

Waves of cloud lap
the shore of sky.
The peacocks of finance
roaring, rub sleep
from their eyes
and polish their beaks.
Always, always, like
innumerable rats of war
they are telling me too much.
Penniless lovers lie
among bruised tangled sheets,
waves of sunlight spilling
in the window over them.
These are my days,
these are my people.

        --Ray Freed


 


 

Pastoral

I spend the morning
in the salt smell of the sea
on the sand at Banyan’s
watching sets come in,
hearing trades work the palms
under a hot sun lighting
a cloudless sky laced
with volcanic haze,
then amble across Alii Drive
to the Banyan Mart
for a cool guava juice,
fifth in line behind two kids
buying ice cream pops,
a blond teen breeder bursting her halter,
a man with two bags of poi.
A couple comes in
mainland city dressed,
gold earrings and fuschia nails,
brown suit, florsheims, forehead
sweat dripping onto a yellow tie,
he looks at me
no shirt no shoes
tanned and unshaven,
we’re both about 60.
I’ve known him
all his life.

        --Ray Freed

 

 

Cacafuego

The mountains here
press against blue sky
like breasts
against cashmere.

The moon above
Chichicastenango
sings like a siren, raising
small hairs on my arm.

White crabs freeze on the sand,
transfixed in the flashlight's beam.
Peace travels slowly underwater,
avoiding the eels of commerce.

Where are those lost days
when bearded boys & lank haired girls
learned of the Buddha's compassion
via Kerouac, and the prophet

of the D train told us Hattie never
did nothin to William Zanzinger?
Last call. A gratuity of 15%
will be added to your bill.
       
          --Ray Freed


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

       

       
Crazy Bout You


I’m crazy for you honey baby
you walked up the stairs to my heart
and broke down the door.

Those creamy lips
could make butter
in a blizzard.

You’ve got me on a leash,
I’m on all fours for you.

Put your load on me,
I’m your burro,
I’d carry ice from the Pole
to keep you cool.


You’re low tide at full moon
with the reef showing,
just the way I like it.

In your pretty head there’s room
for one thought at a time,
just the way I like it.

How did your mama let you get so tall
those legs, they don’t stop,
just the way I like it.

Where were you
when the rooster
crowed for day?

I come over the hill
with a forty dollar bill
and it’s Ray, Ray
where you been so long.
       
          --Ray Freed

 

 

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THREE ARAB POETS     ELISAVIETTA RITCHIE     RAY FREED     TIA BALLANTINE

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Tia Ballantine is an artist and poet, a teacher with her doctoral degree from UH Manoa and who operates an educational listserv of poems.  As she related to me..."Cwuhm-l,  a free listserv supported by the University of Hawai`i, delivers one poem a day — both contemporary and classical — to subscribers’ email boxes plus occasional announcements of readings. As this is not a discussion list, subscribers do not have to worry about junk mail or unwanted messages. Those interested in subscribing can send an email to Tia Ballantine, who acts as the sole editor, at tiaballantine@earthlink.net, and she will immediately activate the subscription. Every new subscriber receives an informational email that describes how s/he can do such things as temporarily suspend service, etc."  I have been a subscriber for some years now and find it a fascinating source of good work. 

                                     Aloha,

                                            Alan Young


 

 

 

       

     

THE SECRET LIFE OF BIRDS
 

Usually full moon nights are bitter cold.
Not this night. My radio sings warm: Stan Getz –
“Flamingo,” and I keep the blankets rolled.

Years ago (how many?) I heard Stan Getz
play live at sunset. I bathed my baby
in a cast-iron sink, my shirt soaking wet,

windows wide open to river breezes,
and that sweet tenor sax, Getz on his terrace –
“The Girl from Ipanema Goes Walking.”

My baby with soap bubbles on his face
arms raised and fingers stretched to slanted dusk –
the wind heavy with earth, light attached like lace.

That afternoon we’d walked the aqueduct
picking handfuls of mint and chamomile
buckets of blackberries, a single rosebud,

then the evening concert, impromptu wild
serenades, Getz completely unaware
of wet breasts or water on stone tiles.

I sang (I’m sure he never heard). Night came –
we danced, my son and I, on moon swept seas
of sound, ripe with salt, breath, and blood red rain.

Now, far to the south, air is densely sweet
and I’m quite alone, folding bath towels
sorting socks, marveling at this sudden heat.

Today, I nailed bent dowels to windows
for curtains, then walked to where flamingos
wade in shallows, algae green and foul –

Brambles in drag decorated for show –
they’re the llamas of the bird world, aloof
in masquerade, dreaming life as roses.

They approach with quiet dignity, proof
of ‘superiority,’ but when one moves
his feathered head against my neck, I bloom.

         --Tia Ballantine


 

 

 

   

       

      

AFTER THE WORLD ENDS
 

The wild lily that refused
to bloom these eleven years
finally opens.

Morning arrives in pieces.
Noon appears quite green.
It is difficult to breathe.

The wind sounds wild, a heart
beat as erratic as stone
chipped words.

There are imagined days, fog
and saxophones. Slender fingers.
Cotton on skin.

          --Tia Ballantine, 2007



 

 

 

VACANA POETRY   THREE ARAB POETS     ELISAVIETTA RITCHIE     RAY FREED     TIA BALLANTINE

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